The Panther by Rilke

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[this is good]
That is very sad.
It is sad that so much power and will to live should be caged up, but on the other hand isn't it amazing how powerful a panther can be, how potentially very powerful he could be?
[das ist gut]
Since I speak German I can appreciate the quality of your translation. And Rilke is just -- amazing.
Vielen Dank, Lightchaser. Kanst du auch Deutsch schreiben? Es waere wunderbar, ob wir auf Deutsch schreiben koennen.
Oh yes we used to have several blank panthers in the Ozarks most have been killed off. sigh*
Tja natuerlich. Ich muss zugeben, ich bin stolz auf meine Deutchkenntnisse. Ich hab die Sprache ein Paar Jahre in der Schule gelernt und danach am Goethe Institut. Woher kannst du denn Deutsch?
Jetzt muss ich zugeben, dass mein Deutsch "rusty" ist, und ich brauche mehrere Uebung. Ich habe ein Jahr in Muenchen gewohnen, aber zu viel mit den anderen Amerikaneren gesprochen. Ich sollte ein deutsches Freund gehabt haetten, wie du siehst!
There's an untitled poem of his I love, let's see....

Again and again, no matter how well we know the landscape of love
and the little churchyard there, with its sorrowing names
again and again we walk out under the stars
and lie down, face to face with heaven
[this is good]

I love Rilke. One of my favorite poets. This love started in my teen years. The Panther was my favorite of Rilkes.

I like a poem very much that he wrote about birth. does any one know the title? In it he thanks his mother for the gift of his life, which was quite a feat considering how she treated him.

I saw a cougar close up from my car window. So lucky to be in the car.

Lucy, who is so happy to be on Rennee's blog this morning. Thank you!!

What a lovely poem of Rilke's you pulled up--from memory? Thanks, Mark.
I don't know the poem about birth that you're thinking of, Lucy, but you could try Googling it...I first read The Panther in Ann Arbor at UofMichigan with my favorite German instructor Erika because she made me translate it on the spot!

Sorry, here it is in full:

Again and again, however we know the landscape of love
and the little churchyard there, with its sorrowing names,
and the frighteningly silent abyss into which the others
have fallen

Again and again the two of us walk out together
under the ancient trees, lie down again and again
among the flowers, face to face with heaven.

What a beautiful poem, Mark. Did you translate it yourself?
Gosh no. Mein Deutsch ist Scheiß. The translator is Stephen Mitchell, in the Everyman's Library selection entitled 'Ahead of all Parting". I do take the liberty of putting in "heaven" where Mitchell has "the sky"; I think the word Himmel can mean either and I like 'heaven' better.

More importantly.... what a true poem, no? It's impossible to give up the idea of romance, no matter what, and each time you try there is a time, sometimes brief, sometimes longer, that you feel yourself face to face with heaven. OK maybe not EACH TIME, but often enough that you'll always try to find that feeling again.
Stephen Mitchell is a great Rilke translator. I should get one of his books... And you're right, it is impossible to give up on the idea of romance, especially if you're a Romantic, as I tend to be. When I write, I often feel face to face with heaven. I try to make writing a heaven, haven, for myself. Writing is one of my best friends, to be honest.

Yeah, the dream. But is it only another attachment, one of the many that the Buddhists suggest we let go of? I'll be happy when I /own x/ make x amount of money / have a girlfriend.... There's no security, anywhere, and you have to find a way to be happy anyway, they say. Me, I still hope for romance.

As for the other meaning of romance.....A professor I know says we're still in the Romantic era - arguably, even in music, where the 'revolutionary' composers of a hundred years ago defined themselves largely by their oppositeness from Brahms et al. (and of course if you define yourself as the opposite of x, you're still defining yourself by x). But more generally, the lonely individual with extreme talent/ability working away, perhaps hopelessly, against the arrayed forces of nature and society, is obviously still a defining archetype for us - just go see a Bruce Willis movie if you want a Romantic (if not romantic) hero. We still expose ourselves to the power of untamed nature for entertainment, and revere its elemental unstructuredness, see Outward Bound, Eco-tourism, etc.

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