The Metro

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[das ist gut]

great, i love how you described the atmosphre in the train.

Thank you, Tea. I'm glad you liked it.
[this is good]

Excellent writing. I caught some sentence fragments in your work, which you may want to fix. I thought the story was gripping and mysterious. I like your short concise sentences and your descriptions. the short sentences give me as a reader the sense of suspense. Thanks Renee.

Lucy

Thank you, Lucy. I've been very influenced by Alice Notley's latest work In the Pines, which also contains fragmented noir fiction. Notley is an American poet living in Paris who writes prosody, a combination of prose and poetry, and she's just amazing. Here's a link to an excerpt from In the Pines.

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