I have been waiting

Christian Coigny
Christian Coigny
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                                                              I have been waiting

                                                              wet with happiness for you

                                                              to make love to me.

 

 

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Lucy
[this is good]

this goes well with the exquisite photo, but needs more in it. Not necessarily a longer poem, but something else. I think wet with happiness would be after coitus.

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Renee
Thank you for the critique, Lucy, tho I have to say I'm pretty happy with this one the way it is.
Tammie
Lovely!!!!

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