A poet's tree with borrowed flowers

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So Lovely, it looks like the burning bush.
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great tree. green moss and red leaves
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What brilliant color ~ Just beautiful ;o)
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I feel that this is meant to be read with the excitement of a child. The pond is an old place, well-remembered, the frog is new. Didn't Basho have his own form, different then other haiku? I don't know that much.

Lucy

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The moss of the tree reminds me of an old, green pond - with the flaming leaves floating on top.

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